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Teace Findlay's avatar

Paula, thank you so much!

Honestly, being picked for this is a lifesaver. Since I've finished, I kept feeling like something was missing in this piece. I knew that something was holding me back from feeling that is was 'complete' and now I know exactly what it is, and exactly what to focus on. This feedback was amazing. Again, thank you.

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Jackie B.'s avatar

I just wanted to thank you for this workshop, Paula. It was so informative! I have a scene in the beginning of my WIP (more women's fiction than zombie apocalypse, but still...), and I realized after reading this analysis that, with a tweak of a few lines, I could actually add some foreshadowing to my opening chapters! The main character's sister plays a much larger role in some critical issues, later in the book, and I've now turned what was a throwaway conversation into one with tons of subtext. Thank you so much for this!

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